in his bucket
the moon and a koi
a zen Valentine
Author notes
To the zen writer in my favourite list
In a list
A contest entry
- Secret Valentine by Mari Goes.
800 points, ended February 15, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like my haiku
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yes, the place of meditation would not be complete without the sound of gentle waters, and colors of koi...well done...PK
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How do you put a moon in a bucket? I mean it's a billion times bigger than a bucket. And the koi...they're big, would never live in a bucket...especially with a billion times big moon in it!
I once had a zen valentine...she told me to enlighten up...can you hear me? Is this microphone on?
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reflection, moon's reflection
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You don't really think I'm that dumb do you? Tsk tsk.
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Yessss..... wonderful write! I love it!
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My Valentine gift to you Now go look in that bucket, it's the one with a ribbon just next to the pond. Sorry if you miss a koi in your pond
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It's for MEEEE??? YaY..... thanks!
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