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falling leaves...

Wisdom of angels
fell like spent seeds of autumn
upon followers of dead words
denied deeper eyes of faith;

light rose as sunrise in a soul.

Thoughts took wing,in living spirit;
and time and space bent to weighty understanding
for even in the smallest existence
are visions of all possibilities; chances of a day,
vast flowing potential of a lifetime.

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Your prompt is:


"To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
An eternity in an hour."
~William Blake


I remember reading how Blake was persecuted by the Church because he believed that angels spoke to him, imagine...

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  • Leslie gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    beautiful i believe i'm drawn to your poetry for the touches of fresh darkness that you bring, as weird as it sounds every i read a piece of yours images are sepia in my head, anyway, this personally i don't like angels that much but you know this piece, brings the light and the hope in a whole new level.


    • Peteskid gold member
      February 7, 2008
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      thank you Leslie...your words are kind and tender, so lovely... your thoughts will take you someplace, your sepia thoughts, finding light... so wonderful to hear from you...PK


  • ennovy silver member
    February 3, 2008

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    Oh this one sure is written with beautiful hues of warm thoughts. After reading the prompt given...I must salute you my friend. You have done a dynamic piece and I liked it even better then the prompt......novy

    You are always in rare form, producing some wonderful reads....

  • Rowan gold member
    February 3, 2008
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    Beautiful...


  • hoodoolover silver member
    February 3, 2008
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    Gorgeously written, and as Lynda says, absolutely perfect to go with the quote, well done!


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 3, 2008
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    This is perfect for the quote.

    "Words of angels
    fell like spent seeds of autumn
    upon followers of dead words
    denied deeper eyes of faith;

    light rose as sunrise in a soul."

    This touched me from beginning to end and left me with a feeling of hope...sigh~

    Lynda

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