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Love is

Love is like birds
you can mess up
and toss them to the side
but they still come back
because that is what birds do
just like love they are very nice

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In love" by angrymouse
http://angrymouse.deviantart.com/art/In-love-64166720

A contest entry

im only 8 be nice

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  • Denierim
    March 1, 2008
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    This is so sweet! Love is one of the most important things in this world and you're absolutely right with this one; you can never get rid of it even if you toss it aside. It always comes back to us like the birds.

    You did a beautiful job with this poem. Thanks for sharing it with all of us!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    February 11, 2008

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    This is so sweet darling love is a gift that we should all treasure but sadly some people dont thank you for sharing much love always


  • JohnnyD gold member
    February 3, 2008
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    Genna,

    I have been around a very long time and I must tell you this is the best definition of love I've ever seen.

    Melodies told me about you. Melodies was the one who actually brought me to AP two years ago.

    I am sending you 250 points to use as you see fit.

    that was a most fine poem, fine indeed.

    I go by JohnnyD,
    but my name is Len


  • Wilted Rose Bush
    February 3, 2008

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    That was great! It's true. You can never lose true love. Great take on the contest. Good luck Little Sis!


  • Princess Peach
    February 3, 2008

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    good luck in the contest sis! im not sure if this is just a reservation or what, but good luck! ^^

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