in my hat
verses and gold trophy
a valentine's treat
Author notes
It probably only makes sense to the secret Valentine
In a list
A contest entry
- Secret Valentine by Mari Goes.
800 points, ended February 15, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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well I see haiku master's hand at work here, so amazing what one little article can do, a wonderful poem made even better... so very nice...PK
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Are you having problems with your fingers?
Already feel sorry to ask lol don't reply!!! -
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No... kinda pissed off on Jovy to be honest and on those moments I can't say (or write) beautiful things
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come to mommer
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I'm actually a hair away from crying and bursting out to him
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Cool idea..... possibly use a "a" at beginning of L3... to make a phrase between L2 and 3 while leaving L1 as a fragment....
Nice write..... now, I wonder what the treat is???
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Thanks Don! Ah, the treat is what is in my hat, not my hair though lol
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Another haiku. I was thinking about writing one for Mr. Barry, what you think, a good idea?
A haiku dedicated by you is a thing worth having.
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Not everyone thinks the same!
Thanks for thinking so, I'm a nice person don't you think? Just agree!
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