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Scene Sweeper

A multitude of misinterpretted personas
Colluding
In a contemptable ferocity.
Switch to the next frame in the series
If this one does not aggree-
De-tag yourself, become the anonnymous bystander.
Does this faceswapping concern you?
Untold yet unfolding sequences of fleeting moments,
Predictable as your next uncomfortable sip.
Nurtured humour,
Grown in succession from your pretentious, and entirely useless, sarcasm.
Neutraility sweetens this escapade,
A synonym for this catatonia seems worthless,
Just drink your tea dear, and watch the people pass by.

Author notes

havent written anything in a very long while...im not sure where this came from particularly, but i do tend to do this occasionally! anyhoo hope its not too awful?

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  • Cyanide Milkshake
    February 5, 2008

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    I sooo wish I knew what this was about then I'd feel intelligent enough to give a coherant comment lol. I got the feeling it was about society...being somewhat lethargic...bystanders, as you say. Tell me if i'm on the right track XD


    • spot the pink
      February 9, 2008
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      hehe yeh youre right it is, but its kind of about personal society, as in people you know as well as people generally... xxx