all-consuming
all-debilitating and unliberating
this illness on my heart
it comes as a thief in the night
and right
into my very soul
takes hold
blinds and tortures
leaves me helpless and hapless
unable to see love
unable to feel free
unable to love
unstable
heal me
Author notes
If it was not true, it might make a good view
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- Jealousy Is Bad For Your Skin by Dalaney.
775 points, ended February 26, 2008, 13 entries
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honestly, i was really intrested by the title. i love your choice of words. i kinda wanted more of an ending, but leaving people like that can be a good thing. good luck!
xoxo
pixie -
great write
very well described subjective disability
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