Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Wounds


His heart breaks
As he hears her cry
Its the same thing everytime
And he never knows why
In the darkness of the night
When she thinks he's asleep
She lies beside him
And silently she weeps
He is everything to her
That she could ever want or need
But still the pain she feels
And she will never be free
Her tears he feels
As deeply as her pain
And though he tries to comfort her
His attempts are in vain
For no matter how many times
He tells her he loves her
Its not enough to erase
The memory of the hurt
He can wrap his arms around her
And never let go
And still she will cry
Why, he does not know
She does not speak of
The memories that haunt her
The past she lived through
The way things were
So when the clouds cover
The brightness in her eyes
He knows not to ask
For her answers will be lies
He just silently takes her hand
To let her know he is there
To assure her of his love
To remind her he cares
He knows she loves him
But something torments her still
Perhaps there are just some wounds
That time cannot heal.

CJM 8/07/2007

In a list

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • peregrin
    August 12, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Very emotional, such a painful story...
    Gah!
    I can relate to it,
    good write!!!!


  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    February 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    ooooh very painful

    Heal girl, heal...lol...you have a nice boyfriend there ..he is always by your side lol..maybe something horrid happened in the past or stages and stages of unfortunate events but if i were her i'd breakfree from the monsters' chains and be happy lol...good write..strong and sharp!


    • Beauty.From.Pain
      February 5, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      LOL. I wish I could claim to have that boyfriend, but alas, he is but someone I hope to find =) but thank you for the comment.


  • Ell13
    February 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    it looks like a painful but beautiful story to me.. it's so well rhymed.

    good job! and thanks for sharing