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Falling in Love (F)

Falling in love,
Such emotion,
Happiness or pain,
When you first layed eyes on them,

You felt a rush of blood to your head,

You couldn't stop thinking about them,

You longed to be with them,

You just wanted them to notice you,

You were falling in love... 

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  • And Hyetal
    March 1, 2008

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    I like this... You expressed your emotions really well. I like the whole theme of falling in love.

    ~Cassie


  • RainbowGirl257
    February 22, 2008
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    thanks for your comments


  • Dragomiloff
    February 21, 2008

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    I like. a little cliche in parts...but not bad. Did you get line six from the Coldplay album/song?


  • Xx Luna xX
    February 21, 2008
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    Thank you for entering

    You did a great job with this. You have captured love in it's true essence.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    this is a wonderful write written with strong embracing rules and emotions. well done and best of luck

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