the cramps in my stomach are getting
worse
and darling I swear;
If you were here right now
You'd be feeling my lips
pressed against yours
and you wouldn't be able to breathe.
Lately it feels like my life
is about to crash;
Can't focus because I'm always thinking about [you]
and no matter where I go
all of our memories follow me.
I Keep reading the old notes you wrote me and
I get so worked up- how can you hit me and tell me you love me?
My brain cells are going into overdrive trying
to understand
why You did this to me
[Save the I'm Sorry bull shit, okay?]
&& all there's left to do is
hide behind
all my books that
make me realize I'm not the only
person whose life is [fucked up].
but what I really need is
hands that are strong enough
to squeeze out the
feelings that I have for you
and let me
go back in time
to tell you that
this was going to happen.
I Miss You.
A contest entry
- Make Me Sad by hey charlie.
470 points, ended February 20, 2008, 38 entries
Gold trophy winner
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"Lately it feels like my life
is about to crash;
Can't focus because I'm always thinking about [you]
and no matter where I go
all of our memories follow me."
"but what I really need is
hands that are strong enough
to squeeze out the
feelings that I have for you"
this is such an honest piece.
you can do it love. ♥ we'll be behind you in everything.
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You know, when I saw the title of this poem I had a strange, compelling NEED to read this poem. Now I see why. It rocks. Thank you for entering and gracing my contest with your presence. *bows before you*
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"but what I really need is
hands that are strong enough
to squeeze out the
feelings that I have for you
and let me
go back in time
to tell you that
this was going to happen."
I love.love.love.fucking.LOVELOVELOVE. that.
it's everything that i've been trying to say.
it's going on my page.
with your permission && of course, credit.<3
i'm putting it up now so i don't forget, but if you have a problem tell me and i shall take it down
ily!<333
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This is a very moving poem,time is a great healer,so dont get too down.Your memory will fade, but some parts will remain with you forever.Go out and try and enjoy life,believe me you will forget most of the bad times.
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..just fuckin bloody awesome.
you did great dear; your maturing
♥
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i'm stunned...all I can say is beautifu
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<333 -
nice. :]
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oh wow this was so beautiful.
'but what I really need is
hands that are strong enough
to squeeze out the
feelings that I have for you
and let me
go back in time
to tell you that
this was going to happen.'
my favourite verse. i think we'd all do that if we could.
ily. <333
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