Maiden-Of-The-Sky
Oh maiden you look so fine.
All dress up in your for the party.
The smile that you have upon your face,
Would make anyone have a smile.
It so nice to have a party.
For we all know that you will be there dress up.
But most of all it is just to see you smile of joy.
In hope that you will spread that joy.
To all that see you all dress up.
© Rose Patrick Feb 3, 2008
All Rights Reversed
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A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest (February) by Denierim.
600 points, ended March 2, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a sweet poem that can be read in many different ways, I believe. I love how you brought out the maiden who spreads joy to those around her. I liked that image a lot and it brought a smile to my face at the end of the poem. Guess that's at least one smile she brought out in this world.
I like the wording you used here, though it is a bit simple for my personal taste. But the story was a wonderful one and I like the flow here. There could have been more depth to it, but that might've hurt the poem also... I like it as it is a lot, though. Great work with this one!
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You have penned a nice popem to describe the picture. Best of luck in the contest. You take care, Sandy
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