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How I write.

In my head my thought's in rhyme
So poetry is all the time
I just sit and ask my muse
He throws lines and lets me chose

Pick the rhythm that I need
Then copy down at reading speed
Then just check the rhyme and meter
Tittivate to make it sweeter

Learning new styles means I read
So muse can push it out at speed
One problem that I see of late
My muse just will not punctuate

This little voice I hear inside
Has given me a lovely ride
Sometimes he opts to go away
And then I just mope round all day

So I have learned to cal lhim back
By launching "Limerick attack"
He is stubborn, I persist
It is one game he can't resist!

When I find I've written well
I float and feel my ego swell
But when a poem isn't good
I start again, just like you should!


Author notes

Not great I'm afraid will ask him for another version later.

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  • strangerforeigner
    February 4, 2008

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    I like this a lot. The short lines give each thought punch and draw the reader along with you, like a trail of breadcrumbs. wish I could write at reading speed! Thanks and good luck in my contest!


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    I agree with Allen's words
    Though my muse likes to play with birds
    And sit up in the highest tree
    Just where does that leave little me?

    It seems your muse is quite well trained
    Your words flow out quite unrestrained
    Sonnets, sapphics, just plain rhyme
    Prolific writing all the time

    I know at times it seems your muse
    Puts on a pair of walking shoes
    But Jeff we know it's just a stroll
    'Cos pretty soon you're on a roll

    To disappoint is not your style
    You make us cry you make us smile
    Thank you Jeff, you're quite a poet
    Who needs his muse, so let him know it!

    Love
    Sue x


  • PerVirtuous
    February 3, 2008
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    It rhymes. It tells a story. I give it three bunnies.