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Essential Oil { Gold }

Missing image

Charismatic oozed charms

Lead me onwards

into his wooden bed

Melted moments tasted the chocolate

Magnetic the magnetism drawn 

upon, heavenly feathered pillow.

             

Legs spread to the sheets

Loose fitting garments

stripped

Moaned pleasures hushed

Wrapped within velvet lipped kiss

Stroked a back of scented oil

 

Finger glides into the divider

Soft silken flows

tantalising

warm honey glistens

Sweetened by tasted touch

Unfurls

 

Soulful lust penetrates

Deep to the trust

Heightened speed intensities

Entwine two become  one

Electrified sparks fly

Orgasmic explosion fills the air

 

Heart still a race of painted pleasure

Breath hard to catch 

Shuttered ecstasy ruptured delight 

Sweeps to the moon beams of burning light

Falling back wrapped in lovers arms

for now we hold each other and sleep


 

 

 

    
 

 

 

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  • Raul Moreno silver member
    October 25
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    Steamy

    Nice work, I enjoyed this read...

  • drhemantvinze
    July 14
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    Reptile Lady

    Great realistic physiology of orgasm
    Hemant Vinze


  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 16

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    Wow.. this was deeply sensual &
    very beautifully expressed in terms
    of emotion, thoughts, well.. everything!!

    I loved it from beginning to end.. very hot!

    Best of luck & thanks for entering

  • Bob Fox
    October 23, 2008
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    And

    The readers wonders if the honey can always be? And the bed forever a welcome springboard to love.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 30, 2008

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    WOW this is

    to say the least a tad bit steamy, very sensually written to stir the fire and heat. definitely a gold worthy write
    good write indeed


  • Shadow Lynx
    August 31, 2008

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    Deeply sensual without being too blase which makes it all the better a write in my humble opinion. It was almost like i was in bed with ya there Congrats on the gold , well deserved


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    Wow!!! This is just Amazing...

    And well worthy of the shiney...
    Jaw hangs open, cheeks are burning...LOL!
    Felt it, lived it, loved it...
    Another passioned filled & fantastic write...
    Well done!!!


  • Swtpoetryman
    July 4, 2008

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    MORE THAN WORTHY OF THE GOLD, INDEED!

    A very fine piece - in more ways than one, Julie! All I want to know is who was that lucky fellow in bed with you (HE! HE!) - as it wasn't me - and in bed with you is where i long to be - since the first moment that I saw you! Thanks SO MUCH for sharing this sweet, sensual, soulful, heartfelt, streamy, and emotional piece with me on a cloudy 4th of July!
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.


  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    April 13, 2008

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    wow julie!
    you sure know how to write em like this, both tasteful and super HOT!

    keep on writing, i'll keep on reading!

    mike


  • Star of Atlantis
    April 9, 2008

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    this poem has an aluring and deceptive title... i was thinking it was to be about one of my fave things the essential oils i do my craft with. but to my suprise i am found reading the erotic and sentual encounter that seams to be to be a bit of the kind that one would call reckless... of course i like this kind of thing and most of the time think it is written rather slopply but not in your case you did it taistfully. i always feel as if i am reading someones journal and that feeling of not suposed to when i read a persons sexual incounters. i very often blush and also just as often think tmi... but i just cant help falling in to them and reading... erotic that. any way i enjoyed your poem even if it did sneek up on me and yes just incase your wondering i am blushing


  • creationsfromheart
    February 25, 2008

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    this is so erotic and done so tastefully well, you kept the beauty in the the sheets so to speak, I am amazed at how well rounded your talents are from one extreme to the next, I don't think I have a read a poem of yours I have not liked, this is gorgiously wonderful.


  • mistiman
    February 20, 2008
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    Sweet sensuality Julie ... is it my turn next?

  • imahealer
    February 14, 2008

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    Julie, I wanted to get a feel for how you write before I entered your contest. Asa massage therapist, essential oils are definitely an afrodisiac!
    This poem was subtley erotic, taking the reader to your private tryst.I do remember those days. My massages are swedish, but very sensual, as I am in a trance. You are extremely talented. I fear I am not good enough to write anything even nearly as sensual as this. So glad it won the gold!

    Shana


  • jcat gold member
    February 11, 2008
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    WOW Julie......This was so HOT and in such a sensual way!!! Very deserving of the gold!! Congrats!


  • I dont exist
    February 8, 2008

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    well well my dear....didnt know you had it in you hehe!
    very well written and tastefully done so x


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 4, 2008

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    Stunning!!!

    Stunningly-beautiful. Hot, sensual and superbly-written. The imagery here flowed so well through my mind. I can see why this won gold. It is a wonderful piece of writing here. Very loving too.

    Beautiful Julie.
    You have done really well with this
    Wayne Leon
    xx


  • jorjii
    February 4, 2008
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    saucy julie (y) but in a pretty way [= x


  • maralisa silver member
    February 4, 2008
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    wow well werth agold my friend just so soothing to the sences


  • Abe 1
    February 4, 2008

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    wowza

    congrats 2 ya RL i hope u had entered & wowza u did
    awesome !!! hot sensual sexy but tasteful
    luved it
    abe


  • Blue Azure
    February 4, 2008

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    brilliant flow and pace for this very sensual write. realy liked, trod the line of taste carefully but the passion was felt. congrats on the gold! it deserves it!

  • Bob Fox
    February 4, 2008

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    Julie

    I cannot sleep as it is. Now I will toss and turn all not wanting, longing & needing something I can never have. lol


  • daviscth silver member
    February 3, 2008
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    Wow hon, this deserved the gold!!! The picture is great and goes so well with your awesome work!!!!


  • DrunkenRam
    February 3, 2008
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    Congrats on the Gold, It is well deserved, Nice write.
    Now, I need a Shower.


  • poppa
    February 3, 2008
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    Another beautiful poem J.. A tasteful example of this genre.....peace....


  • GentleGiant
    February 3, 2008

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    horny

    does this woman write for an adult magazine ... brb off to the bathroom


  • Abe 1
    February 3, 2008
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    luv

    the title said hey whats this about
    wowza ! blew away by such passion desire and lust
    yet warm & hot a lover 2 lover
    gt poem thanks 4 yr entry and gd luck
    abe


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      February 3, 2008
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      Aww thank you I am so pleased my first attempt at doing this erotic style of writing
      Hugs


  • CherryOnTop
    February 3, 2008

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    Girl you are to hot This is so awesome and totally passionate and intimate...sensual and lustful.Good luck in the contest sis


  • Mezclita
    February 3, 2008

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    Ooohh....

    An erotic write by my big sister... tsk tsk tsk... j/k. I like it a lot the words are all very sensual. I especially like the "essential oil" title and theme as well as the middle (third) stanza

    <3 Alex


  • Mallig gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    Wow, this is great! I think I may have to go to sleep too after reading this. This is described beautifully.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 3, 2008
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    WOW---Great

    Ahhhh----Yesssss----!!!!!!

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