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Sphere Of Serenity

Missing image
As moon of serenity
radiates peace from above
the path to fulfillment
meanders to heart's future.

With staff of guidance,
beacon of truth,
the way shines clearly
to restful sphere.

Follow path in faith
never waver from course
when talons of menace
attempt to snare your soul.

Hues of posterity's contentment
a sanctuary from harm,
in course of purposeful tread,
to be sheltered in eternity
by hands of refuge.




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  • individuality gold member
    June 25

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    a good piece, ah the way is bright with light, no dark shadows to cause any slips or stumbles to hinder the journey.


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    Lovely take on the picture prompt in this contest. Wonderful thoughts expressed in these lines. Congrats on taking gold here. Liked the flow, and message you share here.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    Oh this is just beautiful, what a glorious take on the prompt you have provided, just gorgeous

    Thank you for entering this contest, wishing you the best of luck

    Karen


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    this is a beautiful and spiritual piece gran that has a soothing effect within your words i loved this well done