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Cherry Flavored Deception

I can smile,
and I can blush,
I can lower my head
and act the picture you want.

[ will you just give
it to me already?
I'm tired of your stupidity.
if I have to suffer
through you anymore I'll rip off
those damned pretty lips]

I'll bite my lip
and bat my eyes.
for extra effect
I'll clasp my hands
in front of me.

[ I wonder if those
dull eyes of yours
ever had any luster to them.
I doubt it.]

you'd think me a dolt.
and talk real slow,
but you know
I'm turning you
right into the position
I want you
in ___

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WRaWR. shiny toasters that get smudgy

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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    February 17, 2008
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    Wow....very contradictory....I like how the piece played out...


  • Beauty.From.Pain
    February 6, 2008
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    I loved the revealing of what you are really thinking. Very nice. I like this piece alot.


  • Candyknife
    February 4, 2008

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    uh huh

    well i know whos grabby hands will no longer work , you little sly devil ,
    youre too damn cute for your own good
    and i liked this piece ,
    the flow was a bit off , but still nice ,
    i liked how you showed the front and the truth of your thoughts while doing so , good job ,
    thanks for sharing


  • Lucian Valcor
    February 3, 2008
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    ..... lol im not sure if i should laugh or clap lol that was awesome u really are a good poet

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