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Taking each step

In rushing hour I find my way
to the stairs
Leading me to a different world
of chaos and peace
In anticipation I stand before a choice
Shall I proceed
Taking a deep breath, waiting, seconds feeling
like hours
My choice influencing who I am
Should I follow or lead
My heart pounding
My feet like lead as I take the first step

Step 1 - Entering a different world
Step 2 - Getting to know my way
Step 3 - Meeting other people
Step 4 - Getting over obstacles
Step 5 - Be myself
Step 6 - Counting stops here

I know where this path will lead
Wisdom coming with each step
I will go with the flow and follow
where life will lead

The steps a test of life

Freed to be who I want

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  • Namita
    March 7, 2008

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    This is an interesting write... different from what I expected! Lovely; thanks for entering and good luck in the contest

    - namita


  • JazzALTernative silver member
    February 4, 2008
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    Interesting analysis of what it takes to walk in the right direction.


  • quack silver member
    February 3, 2008
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    i like the last line best
    this is good
    love rhianna