I can feel them
the words on the tip
of my....
how could you?
the mic's on the fritz so of course
everyone'll notice when you dive into
the moshpit...and fucking steal the show
those words they've spilt off the edge of my lips
and I can't seem to take them back
by the way
how's it feel basking in that limelight
now that she's your perfect trophy?
cause I guess I just didn't cut it
I just don't have what it takes to be so fuckin stylish
and I'm too damn loud to be so quiet
if only....
if only I could have been what her dreams were made of
hey sweetheart,
just fuckin hold your breath
Author notes
taking back sunday-timberwolves of new jersey
sorry, but i think I butchered a really good song =[
i dunno i guess i'd do more justice to the used, but i wanted to attempt a favorite.....hope you like at least one line of it
SpinalKisses
A contest entry
- music = life ♥ by CatastrophicSmile.
300 points, ended March 23, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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-love the title. You write amazing...........i can't wait to read more of you.
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wow i'm in awe, and there is NO way you butchered this song.
you know exactly what it's about too, which most ppl don't and the way you wrote is sheer beauty. i love this, i could read it over and over. this is my fav. band and one of my fav. songs lol & i think you made me love the song even more. ♥ thank you sooo much
you deserve 1ST place on the finalist list =]
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it was pretty good
love the anger
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