One
Is all I wanted
Two
Is what we could be
Three
Times the love
Four
For you and me
Five
...This poems sucks
And six
Where was it going?
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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simple... not profound or earth shattering by any means.
But gets the job done. Makes a statement. Brings a smile to the lips.
And despite the simplicity behind it, there is a complexity in the way it manages to fit together along a single thread.
So bravo.
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Interesting
One** was hard put to find
Two** somewhere down the line
Three** make that mary jean and joy
Four** pick and choose one indeed .
as the otheres got annoyed
five** couldnt do it had to much fun
six** now we go back to number one
decisions decisions
haha I couldnt help myself here
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that's awesome. and adorable.
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