Adios, Adeus,
the daily Aurevoir of many;
but "Go with God"
a final goodbye
of faith
A contest entry
- Simplicity of Goodbye by Darianna.
800 points, ended February 8, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A wonderfiul poem!!! A pleasure to read this morning. Yes, some goodbyes can be difficult and at times we want to prolong the sadness of the seperation that follows. Especially when you are deeply in love. A lovely write. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Sandy
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I know this is probably a serious poem, but I couldn't help but laugh. It reminds me so much of how I say goodbye to my family. I end up reeling off a million different ways of saying goodbye...you know...to make it last a little longer.
Thankyou for entering my contest, Goood luck!
Dari xxx -
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Thanks for your kind thoughts. Not too serious perhaps (my poem not your words LOL) - I must learn to write proper English.
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wonderful job, love the way you viewed this contest, and the poem you came out with! just beautiful, powerful, and simple =)
lovely job and good luck in the contest
stephanie =)
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