No money can buy the love of my heart
For my heart knows no price for the gold it knows
The sweat of my brow shall provide the knowledge
That feeds her soul the comfort of knowing my love is good for her
I'll not serve her food nor drink to quench her thirst
Yet my passion is persistant, and like no other, shall be plenty to drink from.
Let my love work wonders on her heart alone
Massaging every loin in her body until she is sure of my love
Let her know that I shall never lose focus on the importance of her pleasures
And that nothing shall push me further than the idea of her happiness alone
Author notes
Line 4 - Good
Line 5 - Serve
Line 6 - Passion & Persistant
Line 7 - Work
Line 9 - Focus
Line 10 - Push & Idea
My testimate of what true love means to me..I hope you enjoyed it.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie (I hope so anyway) by Riftkin.
475 points, ended February 7, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a wonderful take on showing others
just what true love means to you.
love how you made the words your own
and how you presented them in this testiment of love
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