Oh God
I still recollect when you shifted me here
I was so angelic and blameless
after my landing I kept unsealed the entrance
expecting that you will supplement me too
many years I expected
but I could not betoken you
now when not much time is left to last
I am not ceasing the door
though, not expecting that you will accomplish
I am pausing now
for reverting to your castle
Oh God...
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by stavykm.
1700 points, ended February 15, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful
LIke a flower in full bloom is the reward and beauty of patience and of faith. Yes, God knows what He's doing and your flower is lovely.
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Are you speaking about holding fast? I like this one.
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IN INNOCENT WE ARE DRAWN TO GOD WE ARE NOT OF THE WORLD, THEN WE MERGE WE BECOME PART OF THE WORLD, WE LOSE OURSELVES IN THE WORLD AND BECOME DRAWN TO IT, IT IS A BATTLE. ANOTHER PROFOUND WORK OF ART MY FRIEND. GOD BLESS
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Wonderful
What a wonderful poem. I loved the rhythm and just the way it flowed. Then the last lines
I am pausing now
for reverting to your castle
Oh God...
That is just great. The title Reverting To You Castle just compliments the poem as a whole. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
Many Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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This is a beautiful take on this prompt, your faith shows through so beautifully in this piece, goodluck in the contest
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Our lack of faith seems to make us want to open our own doors. Yet, we know we must wait for his intervention. Well written.
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A lovely poem
The temple of the body in comparison to oneness with God? Wow!!!
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A lovely write of hope, and acceptance of living in God's time, not our own...Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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