Feeling all but feeling nothing
Seeing you but no one seen
Hearing words spoken silent
Fearing all that I believe
Rain falling on the house
Pelting on the roof to make me leave
Sitting down for you who stands
High above the ground, I wait
Falling to the ground, I wait
On the snow laid ground, I wait
Waiting for the rain to stop
Author notes
(This is for my Dad, who died on February 6th 2007.)
A contest entry
- music = life ♥ by CatastrophicSmile.
300 points, ended March 23, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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AWESOME!
SEXY! I LIKE IT ALOT! -
wow i'm really sorry about your dad.
this write is so beautiful
you get extra brownie points too because most ppl think this song is about love.
you wrote this perfectly,
i loved your metaphors and everything
x finalist x
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