My heart is broken, stitched and shot.
I'm crying and bleeding, left alone to rot.
You hurt me so much, and you don't even know.
You're too preoccupied with putting on the perfect show.
"Attention folks, gather here.
See that girl, oh, nevermind the tear...
She's a fuckup, wasting away her life...
The cause of her mothers pain and strife."
I'm sick of the bullshit and the lies.
Sick of hearing my own sobs and cries.
While you're yelling, I'm falling apart.
Trying desperately to hold together my shattered heart.
"Zoom in that camera, they're having a fight.
Hey audience, who do you think cries more at night?
The mother? Yeah, I thought so too.
I mean, if she was YOUR daughter, so would YOU."
I hate that you play the victim, it's so wrong.
I'm the victim, I have been all along.
It took me this long to realize, what you do, it's abuse.
You're my only parent, and there is no excuse.
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Uhh...Yeah.
Thoughts? Comments? Puhlease?
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sad, and strong last stanza. however, i think the rhyme scheme comes across as a little forced.
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its so sad.. but wonderfully written, you did express yourself so very well...
i love the whole last stanza, it really shows the realiseation you ahve come to, and the truth.
very well done
keep writting hunni!
and if you ever need to talk you know im here...
love always HB
xoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxxxoooxoxoxoxox
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omg such a strong poem...
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rly good.
your poems is beautifullly written. perfect rhyme. and i love that. It's sad though. and it makes me angry, but not at anyone in particular, just people who' make you mad. and i know i have beeen a shhhhittty friend, so it kinda makes me mad at me...
with love as always,
Me-
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wow. this was a very emotional piece. i cant really leave an in depth comment now because im in class, but i just wanted to let you know i read it and thought it was a good write--sad but good!
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