I can't believe it came down to this.
Never thought that we would be together for all eternity.
Boy you are the only one for me, who would bring me so much glee.
You are a dream come true, always there when I feel blue.
You changed my world around for the better and for the worst, even during the times it hurt.
You make me feel like another woman every time I wake up to see your handsome face and smell your scent of sand and musk.
Baby you treat me so good, better than most boys in the hood.
You are my life, my world, my everything, baby my soul belongs to you.
Because no matter how many years it will do, I would give anything to be with you.
In a list
A contest entry
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Comments
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Aw, the last line was definately the sweetest. ^^ And I like the title "You"... It's simple, but ties everything together well.
Thank you for entering my contest!
~Cassie

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See this grin??? >>>>>
What a darling poem this is! 

Love the "soul belongs to you."


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Oh how I have dreamt of feeling like that

To me it expressed what the author was feeling,and it's great feeling love at least once in your life. because so few get to...You are lucky
Good luck!
~~GRACE~~



