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Water



  For a long time I was able to enter
the bathroom to get a drink
Even though it was very little-
but at least the water was both cold
And fresh-even when my father was absent
although I had a thing with water which
gave me a second source but it was only fresh once
for every filling

  Now after so much time has passed there is a
new faucet in the old sink and to my surprise my
water source is gone- of course there is still
the secondary which has to have the water changed 
at times  although  I hardly go to it being used
to the primary source

Oh how I wish for a good water source to which
I can go regularly- ohwater water water 'where for art
thou' water? Be you near and close? I need you all year-
water fresh and cool? I want you both now and later really
need you all year-might need you more if I took walks like my
father and sister as some times mother

  Water water I need you like my food all the time and I
need you like  attention even right after my meals like
seals need fish- no my name is not Tish  nor is my dish ever
misplaced- I need you day and night even if I have not hardly
a bite- I need you just about 'every hour' I snooze on pillows
or under the puff oh I need  you water oh how I need you

Author notes

I admit the stanzas might be to long, but I wrote this poem watching a cat, that I had at the time, wanting to write what she might be thinking. And as you might've concluded, I thought of her as is, my sister.
Isn't that silly? But I can't help, being that way with pets.

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  • mmistermeh
    February 12, 2008

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    I liked your poem, thank you for the entry