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Flutters of sweet lavender-
Lightly powder Morn's breeze, as blooms dance freely
On tip of lace wings,world of enchantment,their secrets unfold; as-
Whispers giggle-round, fairy rings in wee song
Ever so softly, I--
Return the next day; for a lavender encore, from fairy at play..
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Author notes
Option Five
A Beautiful Lie
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A contest entry
- Options Contest by Simply Simple.
1000 points, ended June 7, 2008, 83 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful imagery and I love the picture!!
So wonderful in so few words. Excellent job! Thanks for entering! And best of luck in the contest! -
Loved it.
Hello old friend. How pleasant to return to your page and find work like this. Lavender, morning, blooms, enchantment, merriment ... yes, I would return
And I will return here.
I like the style of writing here as well. In particular, the break between the last two lines made me pause and sent my imagination on a journey. The break there sounded somewhat playful to me, but definitely left room for us to think.
Very clever piece of work, my friend. -
Airy, light, magical, with charm colorfully at play within your words...visions of day dream's grace with lavender winds wafting as I read. Ahhh thank you.
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This is so beautiful...
It kind of gave me a feeling of peace as I was reading it...
Beautiful...
Good luck in the contest...
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