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Trust me, I need you.

My heart is racing
a thousand miles per second
mirroring my thoughts
flying by in whispers and shouts
never spoken
never heard

One month flies by
when your happy

and you still
turn my legs to jelly
and my stomach
is filled with butterflies
as I lay by your side.

The future approaches
heavy with suspense

and I want you
to be with you always
and to kiss you
in the rain and in the sun
until I become undone.

those thoughts are now spoken
now turned into words
and my heart still beats for you
I'll tell you all my truths
and you can spill your guts
and it's all because of this thing
called
trust.

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  • xTomorrowx
    February 2, 2008

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    Beautifully written...
    The finish was absolutely perfect, it brought the impact in well...
    Greatly written, so true...