Wish you didn't have to go, instead that we could be forever more.
Wish you didn't have to leave, thought that we would always be.
Wish you could have stayed, instead of you going away.
I thought you wouldn't go, and leave me in such woe.
But you had to...you were nothing to me but a dream...or so it seemed.
Wish you were still here with me, holding me and whispering promises that we would would always be.
Wish you were here to wipe the tears I now cry for you because you're gone from my life, my world, and my all.
Wish you didn't leave me in this pain, like being pelted in some heavy rain.
Wish you gave me one last kiss, even though it would be missed.
Even if you never come back to be with me, your love will always remain in my dreams.
I wish you'll be forever in my heart, because I know we'll never part.
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Thank you for entering my humble little contest!
I wish you all the best of luck in it - and thanks again for entering!
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Thank you..my thoughts and feelings exactly!
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touching
This is exactly where I am...right now..it is hard, I am sure you miss them just as I miss my beloved
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This is one of those really rare poems where everyone can relate to. Wishing for things no matter how impossible. Great work.
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I really like the message here, because I know EXACTLY how that feels...my only problem with the poem is I thought the lines were pretty long, making it weird to read...maybe break some of them up into multiple lines, and take out unnecesary words?
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