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Symphony of Ellipsis

Is there ever that person
You would do anything for?
Do you have that person
That you would let them do anything?

Anything...

Is there that one person
That you act a fool for
Every time
You see them.

Every single time...

When your alone with them
Are you going mad with the though
Of just touching them
Of them touching you

And all you want to do
Is kiss them
Let them touch your hand
Let them touch you...

And you let them
But your not gratified with a kiss
Not gratified with a hug
Nothing

Just nothing...

When he is done
And he walks out the door
You long for him back
And to kiss the lips you long for

But you don't
You don't speak
Because you don't want to seem
Dependent, in love...

Because your not
Or you don't think so
Or your afraid they won't come again
If you seem too...

Commited...

Author notes

I'm not in love. I'm not old enough to know he real deffinition of that word. I am just wanting recongnition for some thing you gave to a person you want.

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  • PersephoneInWinter
    February 2, 2008

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    this would make a really good song, because the flow and format are like lyrics. i really like how you wrote this in second person, because it makes the reader more personally attached to the emotions in the poem.

    great write!

    LXF