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Chocalate

Sweet.
Sensations dancing on my tongue.
Delight.
Seems to make the pain disappear.

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 4, 2008
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    very creative... x


  • aestival
    February 2, 2008
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    Nice! Such a great description of chocolate, short & beautiful. Good luck!