I am parchment
pressed
between your fingers
etched
by your pen
I am forgotten words -
crumbled
and cast aside
unfinished poetry
betrayed
for better
inspiration
A contest entry
- Best Prewrites From February 2008 by amaranthine lover.
3150 points, ended March 28, 2008, 36 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such a sad saga, but it's well worth the read! A true mini-masterpiece... Congrats. on the Silver cup!
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beautiful and abstract I love it
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good poem, a contender here...
al -
Aw, but your friends are still here...
So well done as always.
It is inspiring to read your work.
Hope all is well Ruth.
Your friend,
Jim
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very very well done- a clear image which
the title brings full circle- and can still be subject to interpretation
i like it
m
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Wonderful!
I love this. Succinct and powerful metaphor that speaks your message of betrayal clearly. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
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