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Jealous

My jealousy consumes me, until there is nothing left.
It grows into an obsession, and in turn hate.

 

The love that burned deep, is smothered by jealousy.

Every truth becomes doubted, and soon it is lost.

 

Jealousy is a real danger.

Jealousy causes people to murder their neighbor for their belongings. 

 

Jealousy causes men to rape women they can't have.

Jealousy causes men to blow up buildings.

 

Jealousy causes war, it brings nations againist nations.

Jealousy brings ruin, and despair to the World.  

 

Jealousy robs banks, steals cars, and murders sons and daughters.

Jealousy leads to a life of crime and hate. 

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  • HaileeDear
    February 7, 2008

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    you said all there is to say about jealousy and i loved that. i read it as a bit choppy but i love the form you used. good luck
    xoxo
    pixie


  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    February 4, 2008
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    good work

    Hi angel. Goodto read something new from you.


  • ScarletO gold member
    February 2, 2008
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    Yes, jealousy does all that.


  • Dalaney gold member
    February 2, 2008

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    you pretty much have given all the reasons why jealousy can be so destructive, but in a well written form. I thank you for this entry. Love, Lane