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Again and Again

The girl reached out her hand
just to feel the breeze.
Everyone told her it would be alright
but it always haunted her like a disease.
what everyone would think of her.
But what could she say
say no not for me today.
she was trapped in her mind
she thought she could hide
she reached out her hand
again and again
only to fall back again.

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  • xXstopthebleedingXx
    February 2, 2008
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    This is great
    i love it
    keep writing cause your good at it