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Running to Life






horse gallops smoothly
beyond the gate and hillside
striding towards freedom




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  • duana
    July 12, 2008

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    Jen- is this your first haiku? It is BRILLIANT. I love it! Where are you? I miss you around here!


  • duana
    May 9, 2008
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    ooo love it Jen!

    Where are you? I miss you and hope life is going okay for you! Duana


    • JenP
      May 10, 2008
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      Hey! Thanks for the comment. I've just had so much to do lately and so much crap to deal with. I'm ok though, or at least I'm going to be.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 31, 2008
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    such a commanding image here, beautiful!

    ♥
    whisper

  • hose30
    February 19, 2008

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    I like this. I have always thought that you were a great poet. You did a great job on this. Great imagery and it makes feel free as well.It gives a colorful picture here.but good job and take care.


  • Chocolate Chip
    February 2, 2008
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    i really like the images i get in my head when reading it.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 2, 2008

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    Ohh this is excellent! Great job on this form, it speaks volumes and beautifully. I can easily see this metaphorically as well.


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 2, 2008

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    Liked the visions this brings to mind. Thought at first this was a haiku, but see it is not - last line has one too many syllables (5,7,5 in traditional haiku).


  • LuchiaNanami
    February 2, 2008
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    Amazing!

    this shows much freedom in a short poem! great poem!

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