Never let me go
hold me tighter now
than ever before
I need to feel your spirit
pull me through
my darken days
exhaust my pain
Jesus take my hand
Dry my tears
erase my bitterness
I want to stop
this suffering
Jesus take my hand
Never let me go
hold me tighter now
than ever before
Please tell me what you think
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this is a stong piece. it was beautiful i loved it! bravo great write
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Thank you for commenting, i'm glad you liked it. This was written when I was going through a bad time and a lot of pain with my legs and almost lost my left leg just below my knee. I was chating overtime with God
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I LOVE this!! you will be amazed and in awe of the things that happen when you call on God. You start to lean on him and trust in him he'll show you miracles you never thought possible...i'm STILL experiencing that. i am so blessed bye this, you have no idea.
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
this sounds as if you are giving up on life. its good, but I really don't know what to say.
I love you
Patrick
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No no no ..... If you remember about a month and half ago when things started to get worse with my legs and the ER visit and me being up every night crying and in an unimaginable amount of pain, I started to write this poem asking for the lord to help ease my pain I just finished it the other night, i'm not giving up on anything I plan on fighting this having the surgery and getting better cause i'm not going to go through this ever again. I hate being restricted and I don't like not working I miss my clients and I don't like being a burden on anyone cause I know it's a pain in the butt.
Ok so thats why I wrote it
I love you very much
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oh...my mistake. You are not a burden on me though. It is with love that I take care of you and see to it that you are getting healthy again
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