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The Penis From Within

My cock sneezes with rhymes
obscene
and sprays with lines of sweetened
poetry

Each vein conveys veins of thought
true
this masterful tool is used to jerk and stab
you

Erect in stature and convincing in length
My poetry stands up with undeniable strength

Up and down the rhythms flow
louder and louder crescendos grow

Tongues salivate while eyes wink,
wander and stare
Bells and balls chime in unison
Behold! My penis is bare!

Ungloved and unwrapped
my poetry cums thick.
My Phallic member beckons
feast your eyes on my poetic d i c k

This poetess rhymes with a wry, rude grin
She's proud of her throbbing penis - her penis from

WITHIN.

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  • Mat Larkin
    May 28, 2008

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    you're not well...

    but very creative and witty. And your work is memorable...once again an amazing title pulled me in...and the words kept me reading...

  • Colin OBrien
    February 13, 2008
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    Great

    This is so great.... I'm laughing here


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    February 13, 2008

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    LOL

    now this is hilarious
    WOW, I had no idea...well I should have from the Title Great imagery here and very well penned
    I really needed this laugh, glad you featured such a wonderful piece.

    Excellent creation.
    Ephiphany♥


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 12, 2008

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    OMG! This is a hoot! But beyond that, this is a brilliant word play and metaphor and I truly enjoyed it. Great one!


  • Kay-Ann V. Pinnock
    February 11, 2008
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    lol... i was actually laughing while writing this...it was so crazy


  • lilAj
    February 2, 2008
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    wow. I have never seen anyone metaphorize 'poetry' like this.

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