Out of my mind and into your mouth,
my darkest fears -
The words spill out,
clear and flowing
like the raindrops hit the ground -
I am their earth -
And I am wet…
And I am cold…
And I am frozen…
Your sun won’t shine on me
and it leaves me so lost
in the clouds of your eyes
Author notes
1st poem in over a year...
Comments
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well done
I like it.
''words spill out'' ''like the raindrops hit the ground''
Wonderful imagery.
Your imagination is just great.
''clouds of your eyes''. I have never heard better than this.
Good job.
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Wow, this is great!
Thanks a lot for sharing this
one here. I love the imagery
and emotions in this. Keep
up the wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826
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