Out of my mind and into your mouth,
my darkest fears -
The words spill out,
clear and flowing
like the raindrops hit the ground -
I am their earth -
And I am wet…
And I am cold…
And I am frozen…
Your sun won’t shine on me
and it leaves me so lost
in the clouds of your eyes
Author notes
1st poem in over a year...
Comments
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Sounds as if you trusted and confided in someone who one day used your secrets to turn against and attack you(?)
The muddied earth analogy is quite profound to express your sullen emotions soddened with sorrow.
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well done
I like it.
''words spill out'' ''like the raindrops hit the ground''
Wonderful imagery.
Your imagination is just great.
''clouds of your eyes''. I have never heard better than this.
Good job.
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Wow, this is great!
Thanks a lot for sharing this
one here. I love the imagery
and emotions in this. Keep
up the wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826
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