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Deep

Conversation can get deep
But Deep can be good
Like getting lost
In your deep blues
Lost in a world
That I yet know
Getting lost deep
In a mystery
Or deep in a heart
I want to explore
Deep can be good
and wonderful at times
I wouldn't mind getting
lost deep with you

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Don't run from Love

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  • gullionmar
    February 3, 2008
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    nice

    nice write charlie havent talked to you in a while hope things are good for ya take care mary


  • Kathryn Bowden
    February 2, 2008
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    wonderful! really nice write, I enjoyed it.

  • June-bug
    February 2, 2008
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    Interesting title to the emotional undercurrent I get as I read your words. As I read this a few times and my mind went deep into my own thoughts. I personally enjoyed reading as it is takes one off into another realm of thoughts. Wish I could just get mine together to create such wonderful writes.


  • Perception
    February 2, 2008

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    Very interesting and thought provoking. I liked the flow in this one, but some of the lines were a bit awkward, like "Conversation can get deep/But Deep can be good" I just thought "But Deep can be good" I don't know. It was weird. Maybe, it was just me. The word usage just seemed a bit off in this poem.... for some reason.

    Anyways, I like how this poem was short, but full of thought and emotion. ~ Great job