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Pouring sugar in my coffee


Sunday mornings I hate
     sit on my bed, my hair flying everywhere
     the sun seems bright, too bright for me
[I'd so much rather go back to sleep]

Sunday morning's are the worse
     you know why?
     'cause the toaster always burns my toasts
and I never liked things that are crunchy

But Sundays must come, for if they weren't
neither would Saturdays or Mondays be
or any other day of the week

But the feeling of absolute boredom I get
Whenever I wake up on a Sunday, I just can't stand
     I get of my bed, make it to the kitchen and grab a cup
     pour some coffee in and then some sugar

Yes, we love to make bitters sweet
But sugar isn't the best way for me

It's like cutting all Sundays off a calendar
and pretend they  don't exist

[Afterall, I don't like my coffee sweet]

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  • disenchanted-vampire
    February 7, 2008
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    Really unusual poem and metaphors...good though

    • Latradi
      February 8, 2008
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      Thanks. I'm glad you got that it's a metaphor.. although I really DO hate Sundays


  • total20clutz
    February 2, 2008
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    I like it 20000 times very much

    • Latradi
      February 3, 2008
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      Haahhaa that's 20000 times more than I like it! LOL
      Thank you very much for your comment..