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Unloved

Dark eyes look at another
What am I to do
I’m confused
I like them
But they like someone else
I really like them
They ignore me
There my friend
But I like them more
What is a girl to do

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I like someone and they don't like me this way

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  • questionmark.
    May 15, 2008

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    psh

    amazing poem.

    i'm currently going through the exact situation.

    but the guy i like? yeah. his girl friend is my best friend.

    ugh.


  • DeadlyTurnip
    February 24, 2008

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    Hmm...I can give you some advice for the moment Go out with some friends, be totally crazy, and forget yourself. Just for a minute. I don't mean do something you might totally regret later, but do something you know you love with someone you know you trust and who you can have fun with. You know what I mean? Maybe not... But whatever. I hope you feel better soon, great poem.


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    February 2, 2008

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    Awww you poor girl

    It sucks, but don't think your alone there, it happens to the best of us...

    Great write, hope it works itself out for you.

    ~*~* Angel *~*~


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 2, 2008

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    I know this feeling. It really sort of sucks when someone doesn't like you the same way. But you know sometimes a great friend is worth more than anything else. I really like your poem


  • StarIlluminated
    February 2, 2008

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    Aww that's sad. Although I don't know who it is. Good poem though!
    *KT*

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