The snow is softly falling
In the darkness of the night
Silently covering the world in white
What a beautiful site for us to see
When we open our eyes as
the new day comes to be
Totally pure untouched by man
Made and given by Gods great hand
A more beautiful site I have yet to see
Fresh and clean and pure and free
But as the day goes on the snow cant last
for long children run and jump and play
Until the cold rain comes and washes it away
And as the day comes to an end we pray
Tonight the snow will come back again
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Pre Written Rhyme by piccola.
900 points, ended February 5, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Snowy Weather by im only half empty.
525 points, ended February 17, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Winter Poetry by misticmoonlite.
575 points, ended November 13, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very pretty picture you painted in your words, love the words of simplicity and the entry to my contest, thank you and good luck
Linda
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Great ryhming scheme and imagery. My only problem is that this piece lacks puncuation.
"Totally pure untouched by man
Made and given by God's great hand
A more beautiful site I have yet to see -
Nicely done. Snow is so nice when it's fresh and new before turning to slush or ice. Just playing in it as it falls softly and quietly...great visions made by your write. Thank you for entering.
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beautiful
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