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lost hope

i stand before you as you yell at me
the words i hear is i am a lost hope
that i can no longer be helped
i look at you tears in my eyes

i let my head sag down looking at the ground
i just stand there and listen to you
i feel like you are right i am a lost hope
that i am beyound help


you force me to look at you
i try to close my eyes but you tell me to look at you
so i look at you and you gently kiss me
you say i love you

i let you pull me close
i may be a lost hope yet you won't let me go
you hold me against you
i let my tears fall slowly down my cheeks


i hate this that you have this control over me
that i am yours no matter if i am a lost hope
you swear you will never let me go
so i stand as your lost hope forever

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10) Lost Hope

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  • Laura-Critchley
    February 2, 2008
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    This is really emotional.

    Well done!