Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Amen

beneath the parting moonlight visions dances
the gentle sadness of a fading dream
that pencils in between each falling moment
a poem softly calling to be seen

from out the sea of drowning hearts despairing
her outstretched fingers reach to touch the dawn
a blessing falls like mist and whispers stillness
an amen lingers in the calm

God bless,

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • FransB gold member
    February 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is a lovely poem with beautiful meaningful content. You have penned a poem worth reading, and it reflects the title well. I have sent you a message under separate cover. God bless. FransB