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Tiny wings flutter

Frivolity in all her glitter as moon beams
Lead hustle from bustle splashed of green,
Or bow, toiling her dance in glimmer of sun,
Waking after showers with liberation, frolic spun
Endless beauty, separate her a thread of muse
Ruffled in whimsy dreams on babe’s inspiration ruse.

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  • Somnium13
    March 15, 2008

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    Lovely imagery, flow and rhyme. You really bring the images to life and your vocabularly is brilliant.

    • haley27 gold member
      March 15, 2008
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      thank u

      thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem and applaudes given too. Haley27


  • backtoeden
    February 23, 2008
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    The wording is beautiful and creative, liked the flow too, great job!

    • haley27 gold member
      February 24, 2008
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      Thank u

      Thank u for the wonderful comment given to my poem. Haley27


  • Grateful
    February 6, 2008
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    very nice poem...enjoyed it...thank you

    • haley27 gold member
      February 6, 2008
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      thank u

      I'm glad u liked my poem. Thank u for the wonderful critique. Haley27


  • LilyRose
    February 2, 2008

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    Depths of beautiful visions call me to explore this write within its luscious prose appreciating the talent of you, dear poet. Refreshing to inhale...

    • haley27 gold member
      February 3, 2008
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      thank u

      thank u for the sentiments givern to my poetry. Haley27

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