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Naked

Bare

Pale skin radiating

stimulating the eyes

Essence of the body

Speaks much louder

nude



A contest entry

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  • N e a r
    February 4, 2008

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    "Speaks much louder

    nude"

    I LOVE when poets put a single word/phrase at the end of a poem, and it just screams out, surging through the audience with its vibes.

    And always just having the word "nude" compared to the beginning word "bare" and the title "naked".

    Also, your simple yet compelling imagery is fantastic.

    Best of luck to you in the contest!

    M a r l u x i a