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Spirit

Never accessible
emotions shunned the light, found
places of pale night
and un-seeing eyes; dwelled
well in aloof sanctity.

Buried beneath closed words
obscured by blinding glare
light that covers from sight;
such is the instinct to self preserve,
rest in life undisturbed.

A shed skin grows another
while that which shrinks from day
smothers away and
does not find the sun.

I found wonder upon a blank wall
in a dream of dreams, and spirit
guided my hands to open an empty purse
to discover wealth beyond measure.


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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Kahlil Gibran

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  • gaze
    February 3, 2008

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    He does have very wise words, and your poem follows his line of thoughts.
    The last stanza is amazingly good in depth!
    This is one of the poems I like to keep to read again and again.