Have you seen my Teddy
I can't find him anywhere
I've looked in the laundry
even in my comfy chair
When I went to bed last night
he was right here by my side
I've looked everywhere
now all I can do is cry
Thinking back trying to remember
if I had done anything wrong
I told him a good night story
and sang his favorite song
I put on his pajamas
and warm socks upon his feet
Gave him a drink of water
and helped brush his teeth
So now as I search my house
turning over every stone
I can't help but feel that
without my Teddy I'm so alone
One more room to search
before my day is done
For I need my Teddy
I need a Teddy Bear hug
As I opened my bathroom door
much too my surprise
There my Teddy sat
with tear filled eyes
"Mommy I've been here since 2
it's been such a long night"
"You forgot to put more toilet tissue out
there was none in sight"
So now I've found my Teddy
there's celebration in the air
I promise too never forget the toilet tissue
a fresh batch will always be there
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A contest entry
- Hit my funny bone to celebrate my first gold by maralisa.
425 points, ended March 20, 2008, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes by vampireprincess.
315 points, ended June 25, 2008, 59 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can picture this so well ... putting sox on his wee tiny feet. Nice job, thank you for entering. The rhyme is done well which helps the flow along nicely
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OMG! It's soooooo cute! I love it!
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aww it's so cute.. I loved it...The poem flows nicely.. well done
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Haha, I love this! I certainly wasn't expecting that ending.
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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This is a very sweet piece, so lovely for a child to read. I love the little story you told. And the background goes so well with it. A very cute piece, good luck in the contest
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this is one of the best poems i have read so far it is fantastic we love thank you for sharing this poem with me and my daughter we loved every word and the background is beautiful good luck in my contest
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Lovely write this and brought a smile too-I'm so glad little teddy is alright now!!
Good luck with this one.
xxx Hilly
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very nice write i enjoyed this alot thank you for your entry and your time. best of luck to you
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this is nice poem auntie goodluck in the contest love Genna
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haha aww this is sweet
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Well, that's a different twist. Very cute poem. Good luck in the contest.
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