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Storms

They are powerful forces
That strike with immense effort

Destroying thousands of homes
Takes hundreds of lives

Wrecks the lives of innocent people

Yet they are amazing

They amuse kids that aren't effected

They can be good

Yet they can be horrid

Author notes

Option #8 i guess

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  • Tarja
    February 3, 2008

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    A little short and simple but not bad... I was hoping for more emotion and personality from this option ... but thanks again anyway.