It's hard to feel and not care at all
On an endless road where the darkness falls
The wheels keep on turning around
In the twilight without making a sound
The speed's the same whether we're on it or on the road
It's maximum gain without the overload
It's all the same here or when I'm gone
An' I can't make it here without you
I won't make it on my own
I can see Ohio in the headlights
Over the constant engine drone
And the road slips quickly by me
Like the blood inside my veins
I will write bloody love letters to you
If I can find that blade again
So take you time to read them
Before my time runs out
I can't wait a moment longer anyway
I can see Ohio in the headlights
Over the constant engine drone
And the road slips quickly by me
Like the blood inside my veins
I will write bloody love letters to you
If I can find that blade again
So take you time to read them
Even if I'm fading from the loss
I can't wait a moment longer before I cross
An' I can't make it here without you
I won't make it on my own
I can see Ohio in the headlights
Over the constant engine drone
And the road slips quickly by me
Like the blood inside my veins
I will write bloody love letters to you
If I can find that blade again
So take you time to read them
Even if I'm fading from the loss
I can't wait a moment longer before I cross...
Author notes
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A contest entry
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Comments
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Beautiful write, very nice idea and works for the prompt. It makes me sad to DQ it, but unfortunately you didn't follow my rules about it not having been in a contest and posting in your AN, thank you for entering though, i enjoyed reading it

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this is beautiful i love it and it's my favorite song by hawthorne heights. =] i love the way you based it around the song. thank you sooo much for entering




