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Ohio In The Headlights

It's hard to feel and not care at all
On an endless road where the darkness falls
The wheels keep on turning around
In the twilight without making a sound
The speed's the same whether we're on it or on the road
It's maximum gain without the overload
It's all the same here or when I'm gone

An' I can't make it here without you
I won't make it on my own
I can see Ohio in the headlights
Over the constant engine drone
And the road slips quickly by me
Like the blood inside my veins
I will write bloody love letters to you
If I can find that blade again

So take you time to read them
Before my time runs out
I can't wait a moment longer anyway

I can see Ohio in the headlights
Over the constant engine drone
And the road slips quickly by me
Like the blood inside my veins
I will write bloody love letters to you
If I can find that blade again

So take you time to read them
Even if I'm fading from the loss
I can't wait a moment longer before I cross

An' I can't make it here without you
I won't make it on my own
I can see Ohio in the headlights
Over the constant engine drone
And the road slips quickly by me
Like the blood inside my veins
I will write bloody love letters to you
If I can find that blade again

So take you time to read them
Even if I'm fading from the loss
I can't wait a moment longer before I cross...

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  • Menna
    May 7

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    Beautiful write, very nice idea and works for the prompt. It makes me sad to DQ it, but unfortunately you didn't follow my rules about it not having been in a contest and posting in your AN, thank you for entering though, i enjoyed reading it


  • CatastrophicSmile
    February 4, 2008

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    this is beautiful i love it and it's my favorite song by hawthorne heights. =] i love the way you based it around the song. thank you sooo much for entering