My fingertips roam gently over silky naked flesh
We lay, hearts beating together, our spirits mesh
Her exposed body motionless, smiling in her sleep
Blankets discarded on the floor in a tangled heap
Fingers move exploring curves from hip to breast
Drifting conquistadors on an aimless quest
Asleep, nestling her exquisite body close to mine
Naked flesh pressed together in a cabin in the pines
A contest entry
- naked by le soir.
675 points, ended March 13, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hee hee and more hee's I REALLY like your style in this...very lovely and not so smugy (meaning ...well dirty n gross lol which I do...not tamed well enuff to keep that kinda stuff to myself)
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I am not so comfortable writing the erotic poetry. Most of mine written in this vein might be called strongly sensual but not the erotic porn style some folks on this site seem to like. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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I used to b shameless about my porn writes but then I met him and things are diff lol...I'm less open but still open as well I gues...odd...that's it odd. Either way smutty was the word I meant to use and well I like this...so this is sensual...sensual rocks lol...I think ur great at it no lie! Keep at it
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Oh my...nice one, all the best in the contest
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed it. You know I have a hard time with this kind of writing.
Mike
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