As memory slips
into space, a vacuum
creates sporadic bursts
of undefined existence.
Anxiety for today’s future
crafts feelings
of destiny unknown
within the mind.
Questions seek answers
unresolved, as remedy
seems within spiritual
spheres of deconstruction.
Associates attempt solace,
but useless advice
stir within answers
feelings of hopelessness.
Diagnosis shapes
intensity at core
of divine intervention,
as mortal struggles.
Memory lapses heighten
disintegrating composure
intensifying fear, beckoning
inner stability and sanity.
Physical deterioration
overrides mental restoration;
acceptance is sought
within divine reinstatement.
Today’s earthly future
unknown, but Divine Supremacy
accepted, as summons to
higher living has begun.
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Author notes
How often do we not contribute a physical ailment as caused by our own doing, when the only answer for this lies in the power of Divine Intervention.
In a list
A contest entry
- Soul Searching by CherryOnTop.
1800 points, ended February 5, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and well done. Congratulations on your honorable mentions.
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What a Brilliant Effort ...
to grasp Divine Architecture ... and what better solution than accepting the predestined and powerful plan of the Supreme Architect!
What I found awesome, is the recognition and the knowing that in decomposition, mortality, thus the temporary, is being stripped away IN ORDER TO be prepared for an immortal Life Hereafter, in the Glory of His Promises and perfection -- FINALLY! -- in his Holy Presence.
GOLD here, my friend. Definitely!
Thank you for these intensely deep thoughts, so typically of you!
Love
Myra
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The first stanza's seem to be a poetical reference to Alan Guth's inflationary theory, used as a metaphor perhaps to the journey of life through space and time. But while mankind is theorizing GOD is fulfilling HIS magnificent plan. Futures will present many situations our limited perception was unable to imagine, all of which are already in place in the great mind that guides Creation to its destiny. Thank you for creating and sharing this thought provoking poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Take care,
Chris
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Thought Provoking and intense. Thank you and good luck in my contest.
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